One more day

So Josh and I just had like a 3 or 4 hour conversation about the themes of the script, the motivation of the afflicted, where they come from, and a few instances of crappy dialog.

I'll be sending the script out tomorrow.

And the new new ending will be significantly better. and more relevant to the script.

Script Update

Hey,

So the script. On top of picking up an extra shift, and dealing with some car trouble (stupid snow), I've spent the last couple days typing up all the changes to the script. I'm going to look over stuff tomorrow, and maybe add another scene. But here's an overview of the changes.

Zack's backstory has been completely changed
The Lily Renee relationship has been strengthened.
The Tom Lily relationship has been strengthened
The Zack Jenn relationship has been strengthened
The Afflicted's eyes no longer turn black, now they bleed blackblood.
The first half of act two has been significantly re-ordered and tweaked.
Almost everything after page 86 has been completely re-written in which-
The Afflicted's motivation has been clarified.
and TONS AND TONS of little things.

The final draft is down one page to 95 pages. Though I'm considering adding a scene with Danny, so we'll see how it goes. I'm going to read through it one more time to check things, expect it to be mailed out tomorrow (tuesday) night. Sorry it's been slow, but I feel much more confident about the script now than I did before. (And I thought it was pretty awesome before)

-Adam